@Graingy
I'm writing a story
For an RP(kinda)
It uses the base template of the roleplay
But a very bastardized future version of it
And I want you to review it
Or at least the part that I'm willing to finish at 20 till seven on a Sunday morning
The RP is my RP*[the RP has a whole lot of story before it was opened to the public, and I'll be using my own private version], the Duo World (not linking it, as I'm not gonna dip that low for promotion)
It's gonna consist of a war, one against a drone [I'll link the specific aircraft in the story itself]
I don't know why I'm telling you this, I just want you to review it to see if it's good
@Graingy
Quite so
Especially odd after the last 2 dreams before it were about love, getting kinky and all that stuff
Like what a contrast holy sh8
Also
The dream felt oddly familiar
Like I had it before, but no bombing
It took place in my school, but that specific version of my school
The darker, cloudier skies, older classrooms
This might have been an alt. Version of another dream?
@Graingy
Also
The sound of the jet engine in that dream still sits with me (probably BC I had the dream this morning so yea I'll remember it)
How can I fear a sound I've never heard
@Graingy
It gets thrown around occasionally for once side to get supremacy over the other
Overall, both sides are pretty sweet
The south is cleaner and better regulated, but like, they're an EU member
The North is doing decent for the only country that recognises it being Turkey
@Graingy
I guess, because he was right that time
But imagine going "dad we're under attack by the United States" and he goes "You sure you aren't dreaming"
Literally gaslit me (even tho he was right?)
Also, the Cyprus in that dream was simply insane, definitely where I'd like to live
The border between the 2 nations was completely open, just free to walk through, and a ring pattern (like the ones on a tree) that was green yellow in the south, and orange red in the north. Not to mention the north was super clean and open
Tho it was getting bombed so yk
Also just before the dream ended, I'd ran into a restaurant that was strangely familiar
l said to myself: "man this place looks familiar, just a bit off tho" in my dream
@SpetzavodHeavyIndustries
Indeed
Geen
@CaptainNoble
Uh huhhh
@Hooha12
@Mrcooldude
@warthunderBIAS
@BluesynVN
@avDude4
@TitanVector
@AVWL
@WG
@SuperSuperTheSylph
@DoctorNowhere
@ZealousKestrel
Every plane is cockpit worthy :)
@Graingy
Alright thanks for the advice
@ZealousKestrel
No no do it to this one
The one you made
And then eventually add a cockpit like 40 years later
@Graingy
Yeah
@Graingy
Ok bye now
@ZealousKestrel
Indeed
So you should continually update it and upload it with the slight difference for "archive purposes" (when burnt out)
@Graingy
I'm writing a story
For an RP(kinda)
It uses the base template of the roleplay
But a very bastardized future version of it
And I want you to review it
Or at least the part that I'm willing to finish at 20 till seven on a Sunday morning
The RP is my RP*[the RP has a whole lot of story before it was opened to the public, and I'll be using my own private version], the Duo World (not linking it, as I'm not gonna dip that low for promotion)
It's gonna consist of a war, one against a drone [I'll link the specific aircraft in the story itself]
I don't know why I'm telling you this, I just want you to review it to see if it's good
@ZealousKestrel
Is this the last day on earth?
You got thousands of other days
I ain't giving you time constraints
@ZealousKestrel
It is
But we don't stay at no "enough" here
@ZealousKestrel
Come on
I know you want to
@SpetzavodHeavyIndustries
Why the uhh
Geen
@Hooha12
Yeah, an impressive ass plane I gotta say
@ZealousKestrel
So fr
Make M-40 for celebration fr
@Graingy
Yeah anyways
You can write stories right?
What's the
Huh?
Sweet
T
Good luck brodie
Good lord that's fast
@Graingy
Yeah fair
@Graingy
Quite so
Especially odd after the last 2 dreams before it were about love, getting kinky and all that stuff
Like what a contrast holy sh8
Also
The dream felt oddly familiar
Like I had it before, but no bombing
It took place in my school, but that specific version of my school
The darker, cloudier skies, older classrooms
This might have been an alt. Version of another dream?
Good lord
@Graingy
Also
The sound of the jet engine in that dream still sits with me (probably BC I had the dream this morning so yea I'll remember it)
How can I fear a sound I've never heard
@Graingy
It gets thrown around occasionally for once side to get supremacy over the other
Overall, both sides are pretty sweet
The south is cleaner and better regulated, but like, they're an EU member
The North is doing decent for the only country that recognises it being Turkey
Can't believe y'all needed mods to upload with screenshots back then😭😭😭🥀🌹
@Graingy
I guess, because he was right that time
But imagine going "dad we're under attack by the United States" and he goes "You sure you aren't dreaming"
Literally gaslit me (even tho he was right?)
Also, the Cyprus in that dream was simply insane, definitely where I'd like to live
The border between the 2 nations was completely open, just free to walk through, and a ring pattern (like the ones on a tree) that was green yellow in the south, and orange red in the north. Not to mention the north was super clean and open
Tho it was getting bombed so yk
Also just before the dream ended, I'd ran into a restaurant that was strangely familiar
l said to myself: "man this place looks familiar, just a bit off tho" in my dream
@shoean
YOU HAVE 66.6K POINTS
SIX SIX SIX, THE NUMBER OF THE BEAST
Rat :3
@ZealousKestrel
X3
@ZealousKestrel
I sure hope it does
@ZealousKestrel
:3
@ZealousKestrel
X̶̡͔̣͈̥̮̯̮͇̞̬͈̣͉̪̯͚̠̼̝̙̺͕̰̭̩̝̹̤̫͙̽̀̌̾̋̏̊̽͂̓̔̽̏͆̀̓͆͋͗̿͛̍̀͌̓̈́͊̌̏̆͐̒͑́͊̆͊̓̂̅̒̒̽̈̅̾̍́͐̆̉̏̓́̚̚͘͘̚̕͠͝͝͠ͅͅᗡ̶̛͍̭̯̯͈̫̻͑̂͌̀̆̂͗̅̈́̌̀̂͆̔̋͗̀̏̾̎̊̂̓̃̐͗̔́́͐͒̊̊̑̈́̄͑͌͛̓̑̆͘͘͠͝͠͝͠͠ ̶̨̧̢̡̢̧͈͉͚͓̻̩̼̮̖͈̹͉̙̠͍͚̯͙̠͈̫̲̬͉̟̫͚͎͓̬̙͇̣̠̗̺̘̼͈̦̲̜̗̦̭̜̣̭̮̗̭̩̞͚̫̹̺͊̾͆́̀̀͊̊̔̐͗͊̾̈̍͗̾͗̍͆̀͆̚͜͜͝ͅͅɒ̵̧̡̛̼͉̭͓͙̬̝̟̞̯̘̞̗̖͔̜̼̖͕͉̭̟̩̖͔̪̝͉̜̻͍̣̘͎͍̐̑̒̈̑͒͗̒̐̈̓̃͒̒̂̂͊͒̀̑͌̓̃̈́̂̔̿́̓̈́̃͐͒̈́̋̍̂͗̉́̒̑͂̓̚̕͘̚̕̕͜͝͝͠͠ɒ̴̡̡̛̛̖͉̭̫̼̞͙̩̹̤̼͖̖͍̟̱̳̭͗̾̊̋͑̈̋̍͊̄̑̀͗̋̀̊̀̋̋̿͊͊̂̅͋͋̿̒̽̆̽̾̂̈́͒̆͗̎͒̑̂͗̋͗̃̓̎͗̆͋́͋̀͐͂͆̈͛̇̏̀́̇̄͘͘͘̚͠͝͝͝͝ɒ̷͚̊̒͌̃̓͛̐̌̃̊̾͑̅̿̒͘ɒ̷̢̧̢̡̨̛͈̻̞̹̠͚̝̻͕̭̯̼͕̹̭̼̫͍̫̺̘̥̜̫̘̣̻̠̝͔̱̗͈͓͚̥̼̤̮̗̫͙͓̤̙͎̻̮̫̦̜͙̹̙̌̅̈́̉́̾͌̀̒̌͆̅̀͌̾̆̍̒̉̿̀̓̄͆͆͂̓̓̈́̆͒͗̄̽̃̀̈́͑͗̓̒̓̓̎̌̐͋̈́̔̇͗͐͋̊̑͘̕̕̚͜͜͝͝͠͝͠͠͠͝͝͝͠ͅͅɒ̷̡̡̧̨̨̛̛̛̗̲͔̞̜̘̻̝͙̼̣̬̠̗̼͍͕̥̤̦̬̯̳̙̗͍̺̯̗͚͕̗̳̩̖̯̤̹͎̟̳͉̭̦̯͎̳̤̦͚̜͍̄̅̍͆̀̓̒͑̒̽̇̀́̊͋́͐̋̋̅́͆̾́̃͋͑̊̾̈́̆̅͑̑̐̍̓́͐̍̽̈́͒̏͐͒͂͑̀̿́̿́͂̿̾̂͋̚͘͜͠͠͠͝ͅͅɒ̵̨̨̨̢̨̛̛̩̘̞͕̟͕̲͍͇̭̖͍̝̙̳͓̟̬̖̺̻͔͖̱̝̲̳͈̭͉̬̼̳͇͚̣̥̤̠̫͎̖̃̐͛̊̔̈́̽͂̾͆́̀̀̀̈̾̈́͆͊́́̿̅̈́̀̌̔̌̽̏̿͊͊̈́́͆̉̿̓́̉́̕̕͘͘͜͜͝ɒ̴̗̱̖̞̜͕̼͒̅̍͌̊̀̆̏́̅̈́͗̈́̒̋͒͐̓͑͒̕͝w̶̢̧̢̢̡̢̛̛̛͔̟̖̙̤̺̱̲̻̥̭̞͖̼̦̲̮̹̤̙̹̟̘̣͇̳̱̟͖̞̰̯̙̞̖̟͉͖͙̣̮͇̙̬͈͖͈̬̝̗̙̬̤̱̘̣̱̤͈̤̥̐̈͐͛͒̅́̊̆̈͆͐͐̓̌̂̎͊̿͂̀̑̋̏̄̏̔͛͑̿͗̃̆́͆̒̉̏̈́̽̔̈́̈́͛̈́̂̍̇̑͐̈́͋͐́̾̃̿̾̆̌̽̊͗̚̕͘͘͘͘͜͜͠͝͝ ̴̛̛̺̬̖̯̣̪͕̣̬̭͈͍̓̍͒͊͆̊̉̍̓̓͠ʏ̸̢̧̡̫̭̮̬͖͈̬͍̥̲͍̣̭͔̦̖̫͍̪̜̗͍͍̣̯͔̙͈̜̲̭̓̐̏͒̾̆̏̉͂̕ͅɿ̸̡̡̛̗̝͕̭̰̬̲̳̫͓͚͎̰̲̤̭̼͓̤̬͔̳̺̣͕̳̬̫̮̻̥͉̣͖̼͎̔̓͛̈̇͂͋́̀̌̑̍̿͋͂̇͒͂̅̃͊̽̐͑̔̈́̅͑̎͛̔̐̍̆͂́͐̎̉̌̀͋̋̏̋́̌͑̄͑͗̄̈̒̀́̃̎̀̋̽̇̓͐́͊̈́͊̑̓͘̕̕͝͝͝͝ͅͅɔ̴͚͚̥̱̹̈́͛ ̴̨̨̨̢̡̢̛̭͖͎̦̲̥̣̰̩̥̟̤̙̰̪̦̥̫̠̳͔̙͕̆̊̍̾͐̅͐̊̈́͌͊̐͗̒̈̆̀̊̓͂̈́͒̏͗͋̌̓͒̀̈́̒͒̽͛̓͂̿̽̅̀̎͐̍͌̊̅̍̽͌̈͊͐͛̄̕̚͘̕͜͠͠͝͝ɒ̸͙̽͌̐̉̓͂̍̈́̕̚͠͠ᴎ̷̨̡̧̢̧̧̛̞͖̝̠̺͔̩̥̮̖͇̝̺̮̬͕̖̺͍̣̣̬̗̝̼̫̩̟̤̦̠̥͔͉͖̼̣̗͓̥̮̫͚̼̱̘̭̣̼̹̘̰̬̫͖͙̈́̈́͐͌̊̈́̓̒̄̊̑̽̊̌̋͑̈̐̑͌̂̽̃̐̔͑̈̽̉́́͒̽̌̌̑͛̍͘̚͠͝͝͝ͅͅͅᴎ̶̨̛̦̦̱͔͍̘̫̭͉̤̝͍̳̪̫͉̫̘̗̦̘̙̰̯̱̳͖̖͇͉͔̘͇̭͖̯͚͓͎͖̙͇͖̦̭͕̣͚̫̤̘̝͎͈̞̰͖̓͛́̐̌́̄̀̿̓̐̋͑͊̋̈́̉̾̑̀̎͂͒̚͜͜͝o̸̟͙̽̾̽͗̅̅̄̊͐̄̔̏̾̾̈́̀̈̓͛̏̋͂̔̐̀́̕̕͘͠͝͝ͅǫ̴̧̛͓̗̮͔̦̲͍͔͇͉̳̪͍̥̞̫̫̼̩͍̋̅́̀͑̏̍̿͋̾̿̽̎͐̈́͑̀͒̄̏̓̿̌̆͑̊̎̓̉̌̌̌̌́̀͐̔̿̌̈́́̚͘͘͝͝͠ͅͅ ̴̢̨̡̨̡̡̡̡̧̫͕̘̣̥͚̣̬̪̲̟̝̞̝̯̰̦̝͕̝̭̳̫̺̻̪̩͖̳͔̰̱͈͙͎̤̺͓͚̬̘͇̹̞̟̪͈̫̤̝̟͙̖͙͎̜̞͉̭͔̗̞̮̼̯̈́̽̿̓̆̆̇͊̾̆͌̿̊̈́͆̂̔̏͛̍̑̅̈́͐̌̀͋̇͋͆̀͒̎͋͊͒̈́̾̏͆̓͌̆̃̉̉́̎̋̍̐͂̕͘̚͘͜͝͝͠͠ͅͅͅm̷̝̳̞̬̲͇̳̉̓̈̊́̈̎̀͛̈̇͑̄̀̊͗̑͊̃̃̈̚̚͘͜ͅ'̷͔̙̗̦̪̙̯̲̥̗́͋̋̍͂̐̏͑̑̌̕Ȋ̷̧̢̡̢̡̡͈̰̲̤̤̬̲̩̼̳̠̗̯̞͔͍̺̻͙̻͖̜̳̘̲̝̞̳̟̪̘̱̮̜̝̼̼̟̻̰̳̙͇̺̞̰̞̖͉͚͓̺̦͔̭̫̳͔̻̲͗͊͂͆̊͛̇̽̅͂̋̈́͠ͅ ̶̨̡̨̨̛̝̜̪̘͕̪̝͙̘̫̗͉͉̳̻̠̳͓͇̖̹͈̪̹̜͓̰͍̬̺̫̺̺̼̽̒́́̊̓̔́̌̉̄͋̀̾̽̅̈́́͑͛͛̑̇͗̚͜͜͜͝ͅͅᴎ̸̨̢̧̧̢̨̨̢̜͓̙͙̬̹̯̯͉̦̠̼̗̝͈̩̪͕̪͖̙̱̜̱̫͎̫̘̥̻̯̰̩̙͇̭̞̥̲̩̝̱̺̘͚̺̩̦̳̮̮̲̤͖͉͓̞̠̦̜̩͑͗̐̈́̎̾̓̎̇͐̓̃̈́̐̅̈́̒̅̈́̄̿̔̎͋͌͐̒̈́̾͊̏̈͊͒̂̾͋́̿̕͝͠͠͝͠ͅͅɒ̸̡̛̛̛̛̩̗̖͕̺͈̮̯̫̰̤̗̘̲̤̲̙̠̖̺̹̔̌̂̀̓̍͋͌͋̒̎̄͌̽̑͒͗̀́̈̓͑͋͛̌̂́̅͛̈͒̃̽̎̉̂͊͋̄͗̒̈́̇̇̏̔͘̕͘͝͝͝͠͝͝͠m̸̱̿͌͐̓̈́͐͛̎̀̆̓̆͗͋͑̾̾̈́̃͒͌̀͑̓̎̒͂͛̑̓̿̈́̂̌̿̇̿̔̄̇͛̆̀́̐͒̽̌͋͌̀̌͂̌̍̉̎́͒̆̕͘̕̚͝ ̴̫͎̩̗̰͍̱̋̇̂̈̋̊̿̓̆͜͝w̴̢̨̧̧̧̟̟̙̱͖̱̖̣̞̗̼̟̲̙̻̥̜̝͔̱̼̜̭̼̳̙̲̏̇̄͗͑́̋̿͒̌̿̈́̈́̀͐̀̀̇͐͊̈́̍̑̄́̏̅̆̋̈́̌͌͆́̋̊̽̿̂͊̍̂͆̾̇̏̈́́͒̿̋̈̑̃͐̿̓̋̆̚͘͘͜͝͝͝͝ͅĄ̴̡̢̨̢̢̢̡̡̡̻͖̟̝̜͚̠̼̬̙̞̖̖̰̫̺͎͙̫̥͙̳͎͓͕̬̞̖̱̜͉̬̩̫͕̙̫̹̼͔̜̙̙͚̼͇͎͖̘͔͙͕͚̬̰͉̺̗͔̖̙͖̮́̅̔̀̍͗̾̔͜͜͠
@ComradeBazookaBall
The only thing that 2 billion dollar triangle solos is Iraqi chi-
@MetallicBeef6572
Yeah sure truce
Goblin :3
@MetallicBeef6572
At least the TSR-2 doesn't need swing wings
@MetallicBeef6572
GTA6 WHO? THIS IS TRUE PEAK
@Graingy
Oh ok
@Graingy
That wasn't my point
But boas ark lmao
Insane ARG potential
@Graingy
Man the bible is genuinely hilarious if it isn't taken as reality
@Rb2h
Woah
@Rb2h
Yoooo
"A trashcan with wings"
Avril Mead