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[Short Story] Stone Skipping Sightseer

54.2k Graingy  4 months ago

A Hundred-Word just written on a whim. Did a paint an adequate picture? There's more to judge, should you like.


Richly green fronds form soft frames around the banks of the pond. Fed by dancing strings of flowing glass down polished rocky slopes, a healthy body is nurtured in earthen palm. Not bird or bug interrupts the ragtime tune of stream leaping off rocks into clear blue below.

Along the edge thumps a passerby. Short, yellow, otherworldly, and with a job to do. Nevertheless, water’s mirth pulls, work’s miasma repels, and soon enough the strange being has picked a flat rock into its plated hand.

Stone tossed into crystal with ambition, it doesn’t leap - but plunges.

The visitor sighs, “Shame.”

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    54.2k Graingy

    Oh hey 7.6 years old now

    4 months ago
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    54.2k Graingy

    @EnglishGarden water, actually.
    Thanks, though.

    4 months ago
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    fire

    +1 4 months ago
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    54.2k Graingy

    @Unwanted Thank you. Not my best work, I feel, though. Really I was trying to distract myself from other stresses.
    Glad you liked it, anyhow.

    +2 4 months ago
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    66.9k BOSKnight

    Very well written. I likey

    +1 4 months ago
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    54.2k Graingy

    @Boeing727200F I don't believe it would qualify seeing as little to no attention was paid to its structure. The previous one, "The Presiding Thrum of Mars", was far more poem-like.

    +1 4 months ago
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    sounds like a poem ngl

    4 months ago
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    54.2k Graingy

    @YarisSedan
    @MIGFOXHOUND31BSM26
    @EnglishGarden

    4 months ago